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Almost all of the feedback I received was either positive or neutral. In this third pitch, I've included an anecdotal example of helping my grandparents with paying invoices. I think this is a relatable example of when the use of technology is inevitable. My pitch is mainly the same in content and I tried to further make my pitch smoother in transition.
Tommy, I liked the way your used a real life example of how you were able to utilize this service to help your grandparents in a specific example. This is neat because it allows the person to whom you are trying to sell the product to gain insight on just how your product can be used. Also, the fact that you mention the tutoring would be in person and paid over an hourly rate provides more context on the specific details.
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ReplyDeleteI really liked this elevator pitch. I think this is a big improvement on your other two elevator pitches. You were dressed well and presented your ideas clearly and with emphasis. You presented your business idea very well and it seems as the more time you spend talking about it the more confident you are discussing it in an elevator pitch. I also like how you went more in depth to talk about the specifics of your business idea. It shows that you're putting thought in how to improve your idea.
Hey Tommy! I really enjoyed your pitch, and adding in the short story about your grandparents truly helps listeners relate and better grasp your business idea. I also thought you did a great job with how you laid out your pitch, and I especially liked that your listed examples of why in-person tutoring is critical to this idea. Great job!
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