After completing the five elements, I find that some of the elements are not joint as I had thought. My concept focuses on using technology to sell, however, it is very limited due to how diverse one can use technology for. It can be very hard to find a market for people who want to learn to use the internet to solely sell online. I am considering generalizing the focus by just targetting individuals who face restrictions in learning technology.
Tommy,
ReplyDeleteI was very impressed by your work on assignment 11. The drawing you did for the napkin idea looked incredible, I especially liked the way the pictured seemed to flow from one idea to the next with arrows to link the relationships. The drawings also provided a positive visual that improved the overall appeal of your idea.
Hey Tommy,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you both visually and descriptively "linked" all of the elements of your business concept idea together. Not only does it feed off of the fundamental points on the left side, but also it provides a visual aid that allows us to get a brief understanding of your idea at a glance. I can see how it would be hard to find those who need to learn technology for such a specific thing, but I still think this has a lot of potential. Excellent job!