Overall I feel that your elevator speech is a great start to your idea! I think that you did a great job with the opener and telling a story that many of us can identify with. I like that your dressed professionally and also had a good cadence to your pitch. Good work on the first pitch!
I feel like your elevator pitch is a great start to establishing your business idea in fruition. Your story was very relatable and I feel like it's a great way to get your target audience's attention in regards to establish your product's market share. You seemed very excited during your pitch and you dressed professionally. Good work on this assignment!
Overall I feel that your elevator speech is a great start to your idea! I think that you did a great job with the opener and telling a story that many of us can identify with. I like that your dressed professionally and also had a good cadence to your pitch. Good work on the first pitch!
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ReplyDeleteI feel like your elevator pitch is a great start to establishing your business idea in fruition. Your story was very relatable and I feel like it's a great way to get your target audience's attention in regards to establish your product's market share. You seemed very excited during your pitch and you dressed professionally. Good work on this assignment!